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		<title>editing</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jul 2007 19:50:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[In Salon, Gary Kamiya writes in praise of editors: The art of editing is running against the cultural tide. We are in an age of volume; editing is about refinement. It&#8217;s about getting deeper into a piece, its ideas, its structure, its language. It&#8217;s a handmade art, a craft. You don&#8217;t learn it overnight. Editing [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In Salon, Gary Kamiya writes <a HREF="http://www.salon.com/opinion/kamiya/2007/07/24/editing/index.html">in praise of editors</a>:<br />
<blockquote>The art of editing is running against the cultural tide. We are in an age of volume; editing is about refinement. It&#8217;s about getting deeper into a piece, its ideas, its structure, its language. It&#8217;s a handmade art, a craft. You don&#8217;t learn it overnight. Editing aims at making a piece more like a Stradivarius and less like a microchip. And as the media universe becomes larger and more filled with microchips, we need the violin makers.</p></blockquote>
<p>And then Digg got its hands on it. From the <a HREF="http://digg.com/tech_news/Let_us_now_praise_editors_In_defense_of_the_editing_profession">comments thread</a> there are many gems. Ninjaboy:<br />
<blockquote>I think we would need less editors if we had less grammar nazi&#8217;s.</p></blockquote>
<p>Or Merkhava:<br />
<blockquote>Editors are censors. We need no more censors. We need no more &#8220;Deciders.&#8221; And we need no more police clad in black armor and combat boots carrying M-16 rifles.</p></blockquote>
<p> Which reminds me of the time I tried calling for editing on Comment is Free, the Guardian&#8217;s hopelessly flame-ridden bitch-fest of a forum. &#8220;We doesn&#8217;t need n0 edit0rs,&#8221; someone said, &#8220;because we has the intern3ts now and we can read what we like&#8221;. <br />Yes, we can. Until there&#8217;s nothing left to read except Merkhava&#8217;s blog. When your sample size is in the billions, the law of averages can take you to a very low place indeed.</p>
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		<title>advertising as conversation</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Jun 2007 20:25:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[John Battelle wants you to think of advertising as a conversation. That thought has made quite a lot of money for him and Federated Media. Except last week they got slapped about by readers for inviting their authors to become part of a &#8220;conversation&#8221; with Microsoft. (His defensive apologetic explains more.) In short, Microsoft would [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>John Battelle wants you to think of advertising as a <a href="http://battellemedia.com/archives/003432.php">conversation</a>. That thought has made quite a lot of money for him and Federated Media. Except last week they got slapped about by readers for inviting their authors to become part of a &#8220;conversation&#8221; with Microsoft. (His <a href="http://www.federatedmedia.net/blog/archives/2007/06/a_follow_up.php">defensive apologetic</a> explains more.)</p>
<p>In short, Microsoft would like &#8220;people-ready&#8221; to mean something. So they get bloggers they advertise with to write nonsense about what people-ready means to them (&#8220;if I was people-ready, I&#8217;d be really ready to engage and entertain people, readily&#8221;). This, apparently, is not advertorial, it&#8217;s a &#8220;conversation&#8221;, and we should be pleased to have a conversation with a marketer. What&#8217;s the problem?</p>
<p>Battelle has a great point about the rise of conversational media, but goes astray when he thinks this means we give advertisers a second run at our trust:<br />
<blockquote>I do not agree with those who regard marketers as a necessary evil. I think that approach reflects the worst baggage of traditional approaches to media, and I for one have dedicated my working life to eliminating it. Marketing can and should be useful, relevant, helpful, and add value to the conversation of a site.</p></blockquote>
<p>The &#8220;baggage&#8221; of our traditional approach comes from years of being burnt. We have advertising standards bodies so that companies can&#8217;t abuse the public&#8217;s trust; we have codes of ethics so that journalists are not writing with agendas hidden from the readers who expect them to be, if not objective, biased on <i>belief</i>, not biased for pay.</p>
<blockquote><p>The very first example of conversational marketing has to do with a very large computer brand which I will keep anonymous, as it&#8217;s not clear they&#8217;d want me talking about them in this forum. </p></blockquote>
<p>You can&#8217;t have a conversation with an anonymous party. An agenda is an agenda, whether it&#8217;s the bent journalist writing a puff, a politician&#8217;s spin, a full-page advertisement or a &#8220;marketing conversation&#8221;.</p>
<p>Advertising is not a conversation. A conversation where one side has an ulterior motive is not a conversation, it&#8217;s a persuasion. You don&#8217;t have a conversation with a car salesman, you have a sales pitch. If you think otherwise, you&#8217;re in danger of leaving the lot in a shiny new vroom you had no intention of purchasing. </p>
<p>Making the pitch <i>feel</i> like a conversation is what marks out the best salesmen, but it doesn&#8217;t make it one.</p>
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